Tuesday, June 12, 2007

I AM DEAD

I sit by my window,
The rain drops hitting hard on the glass,
Dripping sound of water fills the air,
And I just stare,
But I hear nothing,
Because I am dead, all dead…



Many people pass by,
Some fight, some talk,
Some girls, some boys,
Some are happy, some are gloomy,
But I see nothing,
Because I am dead, all dead…



I exist on this earth mechanically,
Something that comes automatically,
Used to live here emotionally,
Used to live foolishly,
But now I care nothing,
Because I am dead, all dead…



My mind is puzzled,
My life is muddled,
Nothing attracts me,
Everyone betrayed me,
But I feel nothing,
Because I am dead, all dead…



I have stopped praying,
I have stopped crying,
I have stopped living,
I have stooped enjoying,
And I know nothing,
Because I am dead, all dead…



I have no one to live for,
I have no one to care for,
I have no one to think for,
I have no one to love for,
I have lost everything,
I have lost everyone,
I am dead, all dead…

5 comments:

Shanky said...

Nice poetry yaar...keep it up!!

TANYA TANEJA said...

good hai....but can write much better than this......prayatn kartein raho...

Narayan Tushar Kaudinya said...

:)..Hi.. Thanks for the lovely comment. Are you on orkut too ?
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Narayan.kaudinya@gmail.com

Dibyanshi said...

good one .. really i am dead

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S A J I T H said...

I heard my friend saying this morning... "I made a mistake... I woke up live again..."
I doonno why I said this here... Bt when I read your poem tats wat strike in my mind!!

good effort!!!

cheers...